Second Shot at Idea Napkin No. 2

1. I am a very sociable guy who likes to talk to people and try to connect with them on any theme possible. I don't have much experience or much skills related to business, even now I'm not so sure about my idea about the business starter is what people need. I, at this point, only see myself as the guy who came up with the idea.
2. I am offering services to solve their unmet need of how to start up a business.
3. I am offering it to people who aspire to be business owners/ entrepreneurs in whatever field they so desire. They are people who want to start a business but doesn't necessarily know how or where to begin. Perhaps they don't have experience in the department of business and only know what they specialize in.
4.They care because of the services I am offering, an opportunity to start something they want to start now. This will be an early opportunity for some, a chance to start something new for others. That is why they would care of the product that I am offering.
5. The only thing that everyone else does not have that I do is the ability to persuade people to assist me in some matters that I know I can't handle myself.

I do believe that I do have some qualities that I can either learn or that I don't know of, that can help in the world of business. However at this very moment I don't have the characteristics that make me qualify for my business concept. I feel that my concept is weaker than most concepts in our class, and I seriously want to improve of this so that maybe I can get more than I signed up for.

The most of what I got from my feedback is that there are many things that can improved, but that I have my head straight on for this.